Yuu's Techniques 2 (FIN)

[Yuu Suika]

Technique Name:

Jiongu: Nami - Earth Grudge Fear: Wave 

Availability: Personal
Prerequisites: Jiongu 
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Nature: - - -
Chakra Consumption: Low
Description:

A fairly simple technique which happens to be a personal favorite of Yuu's. Thrusting his arm forward, dozens of threads will emerge from his arm in an attempt to impale and grab the opponent. These threads have the same sharpness as a standard senbon, able to go entirely through a person due to their length but not causing any fatal damage - even if it were to impale a vital organ such as a heart. This is often used to immobilize enemies or to drag them towards him. 

Technique Name:

Jiongu: Tonbogiri - Earth Grudge Fear: Dragonfly Cutter

Availability: Personal 
Prerequisites: Jiongu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Nature: - - - 
Chakra Consumption: Medium  
Description:

A whip like technique that is more in line with a katana's blade. From his right hand, several threads will twist and turn into a single strong whip. This whip is thirty feet in length, surrounding his arm completely. By swinging his arm, Yuu is able to cut through even large Doton techniques with ease. This only applies to Doton techniques of B ranking an below, leaving only slight scratches on higher ranking Doton techniques. This whip can be compared to high ranking Fuuton techniques in terms of pure sharpness. Unlike most of his sustainable techniques, this one requires no further chakra after the whip is first formed. 

Technique Name:

Youton: Kinku Arashi - Light Release: Scarlet Storm 

Availability: Personal 
Prerequisites: Youton - A rank level chakra control 
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Nature: - - -
Chakra Consumption: Medium
Description:

A specialized technique using Yuu's prowess in Youton techniques. First placing chakra into the tips of his nails, Yuu will proceed to slit both of his wrists using the increased sharpness. He will then place a large amount of Youton chakra into the blood flowing from his wrists by forming the Bird handseal. The physical energy will cause his blood to flow rapidly from his wrists. Normally this would be fatal to a standard person, however thanks to Yuu's Jiongu technique he can simply sow up his slit wrists as if nothing ever happened. As his blood flows, Yuu will then apply shape transformation with a high level of chakra control to launch the blood forward. This takes the form of senbon needles, piercing the opponent at high speeds, albeit at only moderate damage. These blood senbon cover a twenty foot wide area and fly at 5 times kunai speed. 

Technique Name:

Inton: Seikitai - Shadow Release: Astral Body 

Availability: Personal 
Prerequisites: Inton, A leveled Chakra Control 
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu.
Chakra Nature: - - - 
Chakra Consumption: Large, Low Chakra Consumption per Active Post 
Description:

A chakra based technique designed to actively seek out a target from long ranges. utilizing Inton's ability to bring form from nothing, the user will form a shell of chakra around themselves. This chakra will form a shell capable of flight and intangibility, capable of travelling through walls and the ground. Using this astral body, the user can see further as well as well as hear via the medium. Unfortunately this is capable of zero offensive or defensive abilities, as well as still being completely visible to the naked eye. A single hit from something as simple as a senbon is all that's needed to disperse the Astral Body. While this technique is active, Yuu must remain perfectly still holding a handseal with his eyes closed. As such it is only for supplementary use. 

This technique can be maintained for a maximum of 5 posts. 

Technique Name:

Bunshin Daibakuha  - Clone Great Explosion 

Availability: Konohagakure
Prerequisites: Kage Bunshin
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Nature: - - -
Chakra Consumption: Medium + Halve 
Description:

A specialized version of the standard shadow clone technique developed in Konoha. These clones are made with unstable chakra, causing them to remotely detonate on command or wen injured. This explosion has around a twenty foot radius, able to clear out encampments and open up holes in the field. Unlike the standard clones, this is limited to only 2 per use due to the nature of this technique.  

[REAPER]

very nice techniques overall, I only have a few issues.

By swinging his arm, Yuu is able to cut through even large Doton techniques with ease.

Please put a rank on which the doton techniques can still be cut through, I would suggest B-rank and below.

Yuu will then apply shape transformation with a high level of chara control to launch the blood forward.

please put a rank on the chakra control

Chakra Consumption: Medium - Immense (Post dependent)

Astral Body: I would suggest just making this a large usage in chakra plus a low consumption per post its active. Also add a time limit to this please.

[Yuu Suika]

Changes Made

Jiongu: Tonbogiri - Doton B and below only cutable objects  

Youton: Kinku Arashi - Added A ranking chakra control necessity, minor typos 

Inton: Seikitai - Switched from Jounin leveled CC to A ranking to make it less vague, Suggested Chakra changes made as well as a post limit of 5. 

Thank you for all the suggestions ^.^ 

[REAPER]