Snake Kumite l Done

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Style  Name:

Hebi wazu Kumite - Snake sage stone fist

Availability: Snake sage and aprrentice
Description:

The Snake Kata is a fighting style used exclusively by those who have mastered  Snake Sage Mode and trained with the snake  of Ryuchi Cave. Like its counter part of frog kumite The senjutsu chakra used during Sage Mode "activates" the body in various ways, enhancing the user's speed, reflexes, strength, stamina and durability. This allows a sage to achieve incredible feats which include leaping great distances, shattering sharp materials with their bare hands, as well as lifting objects twice their size.

When using Snake Kata, the natural energy used by the practitioner to create senjutsu chakra also surrounds the user in an aura of that same natural energy. This aura can act as an extension of their body and cannot be seen by anyone other than those who have trained in senjutsu or those who are senninka.. By utilizing the aura, the user can extend the range five inches away from there body and force of their physical attacks onto their opponent at the cost of five percent nature energy per strike, These strikes that seemingly or would normally miss will actually make contact with the target. One punch has been shown to have enough force to Crack bone, not unlike the hyuugas juken style minus the closing of chakra points.

[KING]

King here to review! Just as requested.

• Add in the stat increase, and we'll go from there - on top of that, speak of how this is maintained and add a how much Nature Chakra is used in doing this. (You didn't think you could have it for free, did you?)
  

  the body in various ways, enhancing the user's speed, reflexes, strength, stamina and durability. This allows a sage to achieve incredible feats which include leaping great distances, shattering sharp materials with their bare hands, as well as lifting objects several times their size.
  

• How far is the range?
  

  By utilising the aura, the user can extend the range and force of their physical attacks. Strikes that seemingly or would normally miss will actually make contact with the target.

  
  
• Too much for something that's invisible to those who aren't Sennin or Sensory perception orientated. Nerf it.
  

  One punch has been shown to have enough force to cripple and completely finish off an opponent, not unlike Chakra Enhanced Strength.

  
  
• No. All I see here is a "I can't use any defence against myself, let's use this as an excuse."
  

  with the skilful body movements of Frog Kata, allows the practitioner to evade enemy strikes at the last possible moment.

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Fixed

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